Describe the smog. Mention she's on guard duty and go into a description what she sees and gradually build up the area, who's around her, ect and build a momentum to go into what you want to write proper. Don't worry so much about if she comes off like a dick or not right now, just try and get some words in and once you have her talking you might get a better idea for how she is and isn't a dick. The characters I create bio's for and the character I end up giving dialogue end up being varying shades of different because its easier to get a feel for their personality when you have them doing things in the moment.So
The idea for my first chapter is that the soldier MC who's glad they don't have to do guard duty on millitary outpost today bc of the smog outside has to defend it from a raid by mysterious black-ops dudes in black , but idk how to convey with without making her sound like a dick
I’m trying lol
Nice! You're almost at the finish line and only on day six! I salute you.